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#101334
Well, that makes 3. Hairy, you need to learn that factions are more than showcases And groups that People want to be a part Of. They are communities. you cant just join a faction (or 4) Willy- nilly Because Of the sheer fact that you want to join them. Thats honestly the only reason I see you joining some of these factions. You even said To me once you werent really part Of Trinity, you just joined :/.

Im just saying hairy, you should be more wise when you make decisions like this. and even though they are your decisions, Thinking about them would Help tone down some Of the criticism you recieve.
#101338
daimond_boss wrote:Well, that makes 3. Hairy, you need to learn that factions are more than showcases And groups that People want to be a part Of. They are communities. you cant just join a faction (or 4) Willy- nilly Because Of the sheer fact that you want to join them. Thats honestly the only reason I see you joining some of these factions. You even said To me once you werent really part Of Trinity, you just joined :/.

Im just saying hairy, you should be more wise when you make decisions like this. and even though they are your decisions, Thinking about them would Help tone down some Of the criticism you recieve.
hehe i was in trinity guild untell 2 mins ago
#101342
First. I think you were recently told to use periods in your sentences. <--- That thing. *Untill. But that's besides the point. Be wiser when joining and leaving factions spontaneously.
#101414
daimond_boss wrote:First. I think you were recently told to use periods in your sentences. <--- That thing. *Until. But that's besides the point. Be wiser when joining and leaving factions spontaneously.
FTFY.
#101419
daimond_boss wrote:First. I think you were recently told to use periods in your sentences. <--- That thing. *Untill. But that's besides the point. Be wiser when joining and leaving factions spontaneously.
I don't know if you're really in a position to be insulting hairy's writing. Allow me to point out obvious mistakes in yours.

1. "First." is not a complete sentence. You should have said "First:" or "First,"
2. Your correction is spelled wrong. It's spelled "Until".
3. You said "But that's besides the point." You cannot begin a sentence with a conjunction, such as "but".

For the record, I'm not saying that hairy writes well. I'm just saying that you should clean up your own writing a bit before you insult others.

Allow me to rip apart one of your earlier posts:
daimond_boss wrote:Well, that makes 3. Hairy, you need to learn that factions are more than showcases And groups that People want to be a part Of. They are communities. you cant just join a faction (or 4) Willy- nilly Because Of the sheer fact that you want to join them. Thats honestly the only reason I see you joining some of these factions. You even said To me once you werent really part Of Trinity, you just joined :/.

Im just saying hairy, you should be more wise when you make decisions like this. and even though they are your decisions, Thinking about them would Help tone down some Of the criticism you recieve.
Let's begin:

1. Why is "And" capitalized? It's in the middle of a sentence.
2. Why is "People" capitalized? It's also in the middle of a sentence.
3. Why is "Of" capitalized? It's also in the middle of a sentence.
4. "you" needs to be capitalized. It's the beginning of a sentence.
5. "cant" should be "can't"
6. In "willy- nilly" there shouldn't be a space after the dash.
7. "Because" and "Of" shouldn't be capitalized because they are in the middle of a sentence.
8. "Thats" should be "That's"
9. "werent" should be "weren't"
10. "To" shouldn't be capitalized, it's in the middle of a sentence.
11. "Of" shouldn't be capitalize, it's in the middle of a sentence. What is it with you and capitalizing random words?
12. "Im" should be "I'm"
13. "and" needs to be capitalized, it's the start of a sentence. Also, you can't start a sentence with a conjunction.
14. "Thinking" shouldn't be capitalized, it's also in the middle of a sentence.
15. "Help" shouldn't be capitalized, it's in the middle of a sentence.
16. "Of" shouldn't be capitalized. It's in the middle of a sentence.
17. You wrote "recieve", it's spelled "receive"

Again, I'm not saying hairy writes well, but clean up your grammar before insulting others on theirs.
#101430
Sorry for insulting your writing, Hairy. Personally I think that was rather stupid of me, But like I said; that's besides the point. I wanted to get a point across to Hairy that spontaneously joining and leaving factions isn't exactly a 'Good Thing'. Anyways, I'm done with that, Hairy may do (As I already stated) whatever he wishes.
Chaos and Techno, you have both made spelling and grammatical mistakes too. Everybody does. But it was very wrong of me to question Hairy's writing without first consulting mine. It was a huge mistake on my part for doing that.
#101434
CHAOSiron13 wrote:
daimond_boss wrote:First. I think you were recently told to use periods in your sentences. <--- That thing. *Untill. But that's besides the point. Be wiser when joining and leaving factions spontaneously.
I don't know if you're really in a position to be insulting hairy's writing. Allow me to point out obvious mistakes in yours.

1. "First." is not a complete sentence. You should have said "First:" or "First,"
2. Your correction is spelled wrong. It's spelled "Until".
3. You said "But that's besides the point." You cannot begin a sentence with a conjunction, such as "but".

For the record, I'm not saying that hairy writes well. I'm just saying that you should clean up your own writing a bit before you insult others.

Allow me to rip apart one of your earlier posts:
daimond_boss wrote:Well, that makes 3. Hairy, you need to learn that factions are more than showcases And groups that People want to be a part Of. They are communities. you cant just join a faction (or 4) Willy- nilly Because Of the sheer fact that you want to join them. Thats honestly the only reason I see you joining some of these factions. You even said To me once you werent really part Of Trinity, you just joined :/.

Im just saying hairy, you should be more wise when you make decisions like this. and even though they are your decisions, Thinking about them would Help tone down some Of the criticism you recieve.
Let's begin:

1. Why is "And" capitalized? It's in the middle of a sentence.
2. Why is "People" capitalized? It's also in the middle of a sentence.
3. Why is "Of" capitalized? It's also in the middle of a sentence.
4. "you" needs to be capitalized. It's the beginning of a sentence.
5. "cant" should be "can't"
6. In "willy- nilly" there shouldn't be a space after the dash.
7. "Because" and "Of" shouldn't be capitalized because they are in the middle of a sentence.
8. "Thats" should be "That's"
9. "werent" should be "weren't"
10. "To" shouldn't be capitalized, it's in the middle of a sentence.
11. "Of" shouldn't be capitalize, it's in the middle of a sentence. What is it with you and capitalizing random words?
12. "Im" should be "I'm"
13. "and" needs to be capitalized, it's the start of a sentence. Also, you can't start a sentence with a conjunction.
14. "Thinking" shouldn't be capitalized, it's also in the middle of a sentence.
15. "Help" shouldn't be capitalized, it's in the middle of a sentence.
16. "Of" shouldn't be capitalized. It's in the middle of a sentence.
17. You wrote "recieve", it's spelled "receive"

Again, I'm not saying hairy writes well, but clean up your grammar before insulting others on theirs.
Sorry for the double post, I have another thing to say.

1. The "H" In "Hairy" should be capitalized.
2. Lets take a look an #11, "capitalize" should be "capitalized.
3. Now let's see #16, their should be a comma between "capitalized" and "it's".

We all make mistakes. I'm sorry for posting this Chaos. Your really a great guy, I don't like posting comments like this at all. Why don't we forget about the whole conversation?
In respect to Cryptic, lets no longer post about things that are off- topic.
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