[dschew888]

Hairy Sry the guild didn't like the banners:(
We are going to make our own but don't know how

[gregmac980]

First. I think you were recently told to use periods in your sentences. <--- That thing. *Untill. But that's besides the point. Be wiser when joining and leaving factions spontaneously.

I don't know if you're really in a position to be insulting hairy's writing. Allow me to point out obvious mistakes in yours.

1. "First." is not a complete sentence. You should have said "First:" or "First,"
2. Your correction is spelled wrong. It's spelled "Until".
3. You said "But that's besides the point." You cannot begin a sentence with a conjunction, such as "but".

For the record, I'm not saying that hairy writes well. I'm just saying that you should clean up your own writing a bit before you insult others.

Allow me to rip apart one of your earlier posts:

Well, that makes 3. Hairy, you need to learn that factions are more than showcases And groups that People want to be a part Of. They are communities. you cant just join a faction (or 4) Willy- nilly Because Of the sheer fact that you want to join them. Thats honestly the only reason I see you joining some of these factions. You even said To me once you werent really part Of Trinity, you just joined :/.

Im just saying hairy, you should be more wise when you make decisions like this. and even though they are your decisions, Thinking about them would Help tone down some Of the criticism you recieve.

Let's begin:

1. Why is "And" capitalized? It's in the middle of a sentence.
2. Why is "People" capitalized? It's also in the middle of a sentence.
3. Why is "Of" capitalized? It's also in the middle of a sentence.
4. "you" needs to be capitalized. It's the beginning of a sentence.
5. "cant" should be "can't"
6. In "willy- nilly" there shouldn't be a space after the dash.
7. "Because" and "Of" shouldn't be capitalized because they are in the middle of a sentence.
8. "Thats" should be "That's"
9. "werent" should be "weren't"
10. "To" shouldn't be capitalized, it's in the middle of a sentence.
11. "Of" shouldn't be capitalize, it's in the middle of a sentence. What is it with you and capitalizing random words?
12. "Im" should be "I'm"
13. "and" needs to be capitalized, it's the start of a sentence. Also, you can't start a sentence with a conjunction.
14. "Thinking" shouldn't be capitalized, it's also in the middle of a sentence.
15. "Help" shouldn't be capitalized, it's in the middle of a sentence.
16. "Of" shouldn't be capitalized. It's in the middle of a sentence.
17. You wrote "recieve", it's spelled "receive"

Again, I'm not saying hairy writes well, but clean up your grammar before insulting others on theirs.

If i was u i would rage quit

[diamond_boss]

I already replied to his post, and talked to both you and Chaos online, and your deciding to say this now? besides, I said in respect to Cryptic we shouldn't talk about this anymore. Especially considering this is your faction, you should respect that too. =\

[Nephalem]

gramer pls

[Tiny Tiger]

Army Of Darkness... To WAR!!!

[mr. roach]

- I own 2 realms
- I have 18k right now
- Iron, a bit of diamond
- I DO NOT have skype
- I am online everyday
- I am currently 35 in the pvp rankings

[mkman2008]

So you say your a pvp faction, yet you never pvp. Help? I'm a bit confuzzled.

[mr. roach]

disregard my post.... sorry.....