DragonSlayer155 wrote:Dragon returned to Xeros, and head towards Legit and Monster who were discussing kittens and what would happen if you threw one at a brick wall.
Wondering why no one picked up on this...
Lawl.
*Carries Meowrocket home, loads giant slingshot*
Really, guys? Really? *Table flip*
That line made me quite unhappy. >.<
Next let's discuss what happens if you shoot a creeper and a dragonslayer at a brick wall...
Anyway it's decent, but I noticed some grammar and/or spelling errors in there.
Thank you for your time. :3
-Meow
"Bad times friend ahead. Maybe no computer. Maybe no home. I go away but we are two of soul. I will return."
-Anonymous
DragonSlayer155 wrote:The Story of FrozenHeart: SF (So Far)
A little something Ive been working on. Its at about 40% and bare in mind that Im still pretty young. Its about how the dragon that I will be building in Xeros was created. Anyway, have a read:
The Story of FrozenHeart
Includes the previous tale: The Day The Dragon Came
Featuring: DragonSlayer155, CubeGuy314, Legit_Neymar, RedKiller123, Aelcalan, x998monsterx and Shadow the horse.
Chapter 1: "Shadow"
Taking the nether is usually dangerous. But with most of the major pvper's gone, there was no reason not to. DragonSlayer took a step out the portal, and looked at his co-ordinates. He started heading to the Vortex Grinder, where along the way there would supposedly be a secret passageway to enter to reach his fellow guild member, CubeGuy314. As he approached the grinder portal, he heard a knock at the wall. He turned, to see pistons retracting, sucking in the wall, to reveal a familiar face. "Cube!" Dragon said, happy not to see an ambush. "Hey Dragon. Mind ya step and follow me, I'll take you to my place." They walked for blocks, but finally reached a portal that Cube leapt through. Dragon hastily followed, weary of the pig men behind.
They came out to an area, chock full of passive mobs. The two player's travelled up a flight of stairs, through a pair of double doors and came to a small horse pen. "Here he is!" Cube spoke proudly of the pure black foal that stood beside him, which was gazing at Dragon. Pulling out a saddle, wheat and a lead from his back pocket, Dragon lassoed the foal out of the cage to his feet. He then gave some wheat to the stunning creature, who then grew in front of their blocky eyes. Seating himself on the now grown horse and placing on the saddle, Dragon rode over to Cube. "So what are you going to call him?" Cube asked, looking repeatedly back and fourth from the horses blue eyes, to Dragons purple ones. Dragon looked around, and from under his horse, he stopped, stared, looked up at Cube and said, "Shadow."
Chapter 2: "The Article"
After departing with CubeGuy, setting off on a time-consuming journey and swimming through several oceans, Dragon made it back to his home city, Xeros. He got off the horse, put on the lead, and took his new companion to the freshly crafted stables he and his friend Legit_Neymar had put together the night before. After designing a small track, he and Legit raced around day after day. Night after night. Soon becoming Minerealm's best horse riders.
3 days later, when he had just finished his transferral of items to Xeros, x998monsterx saw a piece of paper fly towards him in the wind. Slapping him in the face, it was an article of a Mountain that supposedly had a dragon on it. Knowing that Dragon would soon be know as HorseRider155, he dashed over to him and stopped the horse, causing it to buck and for him to fly off. "Dragon!" Monster exclaimed, running over to a dazed Slayer. "Look what I found. Its an article about a dragon that lives on... Mout Arnae?" DragonSlayer stood, took the paper, and read it. "Never heard of it. It sounds cool though. And Shadow needs to get used to things like this. Why not?" Dragon studied the paper more, but couldn't decipher the smudged writing. "Hmm. I think we need to see, y'know, 'him'" Dragon told Monster, who now had a shocked expression on his face. "B-b-but Intelli said not to go to him, unless things were desperate!" Monster replied. "Yes, but nothing desperate has happened recently, and he might want company." Dragon quickly responded, making his point valid. "Ok, but you go. I'm not getting banned."
"Suit yourself"
Chapter 3: The Elder One
Dragon spawned at Spawn City, and navigated some risky turns. Eventually, he reached an old shack, with the 3 letter's A-E-L above it. He entered through the steel doors, guarded by a dog. As he stepped inside, it was almost like a tardis. The inside looked like something from a science-fiction novel. The walls had neon lights in them, that glowed back and forth between green and blue. The walls were a sharp silver and they all directed up to a single point in the roof. Below that point, sat a figure. The Elder One.
"DragonSlayer155, I presume?" The Elder One suddenly spoke, causing Dragon to jump. "How did you know it was me?" Dragon replied now conscious of what the Elder One was capable of. "You may ask up to three questions every day, and that was your first." The Elder One arose from his seat. "Staff can see everything. We even know where you live DragonSlayer." By this point, Dragon was a little creeped out. But he still had to ask his question. "Do you know where Mout Arnae is?" Dragon spoke with more confidence this time. "Mout Arnae? There's no such place!" The Elder One started chuckling, thinking that Dragon had been sent here as a joke. "But look here," Dragon responded, showing the article to the Elder One. "Mout Arnae." The Elder One looked at the letters. Rearranged 1 or 2. And chuckled. "This article is quite old. The writing has faded but it all means Mount Arcane." Dragon, now knowing where to head, thanked the Elder One and turned to leave. But just before he left, he turned and said, "For my final question. Who are you?" The Elder One rose, took off his hood and spoke with power: "Aelcalan."
Chapter 4: Mount Arcane
Dragon returned to Xeros, and headed towards Monster and Legit, who were discussing kittens and what would happen if you threw one at a brick wall. "Guys!" Dragon shouted across several realms towards them. The pairs of Xerosians turned and looked at Dragon, now only a couple of blocks away. "Im taking a trip to Mount Arcane with Shadow. Anyone wanna come?" Dragon spoke excitedly, hoping to hear a 'Yes' from someone. "Mount Arcane? Isn't it that one there?" Legit pointed out to a large mountain on the horizon. "Yep!"
"And you want to climb it?"
"Yep!"
"And your taking Shadow the horse?"
"Yep!"
"And you want us to come?"
"Yep!"
"And why are you doing this exactly?"
"Ye- I mean... There's a Dragon there, which supposedly is the biggest on Minerealm which many have repeatedly failed to defeat. "Well I gotta... Finish the HQ! So I cant come Im afraid." Legit muttered, quickly running off after. Dragon turned and looked at Monster. "Sorry Dragon. Its a no from me. I think ill stay here and finish the realm." Monster told Dragon, who by now was already starting to go over to the stable.
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Updating soon!
Thanks for reading. Post idea's and your thoughts in the comments! Dont be too harsh please.
x998monsterx posted pretty much this, and here it is again, from me, the full thing
Please do enjoy,
-Dargon
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As Dragon opened the stable using a trapped chest, Shadow peered out of the window, eager for a long walk. He opened the stable doors to a kind face that rubbed against him. Dragon smiled and lead the horse outside and tied it to a fence. He then turned to and ender chest, and opened it. He took his "Dragon Sword of DragonSlayer155" and his "Dragon Bow of DragonSlayer155," both of which had been used to slay previous dragons. He put on some Protection IV armour and took some food, and he was ready. They started heading to Mount Arcane.
As they stood at the foot of the Mountain, Dragon looked up it. Forgetting he had Shadow, he starting climbing blocks and blocks of rugged terrain. About half way up, Dragon felt absolutely exhausted, and stopped for some food. Shadow looked down at the Mountain, and where they had just climbed, then back up at the area that they needed to. Dragon, then stood, put his food away, and started walking again. Shadow stopped, and neighed.
Dragon turned and looked. Shadow was gesturing towards the saddle on his back. Dragon smiled under his checkered bandana-mask-thingy and sat on Shadow. Pulling on the reigns and up they went. To the top, of the legendary, Mount. Arcane.
Chapter 5: The Day the Dragon Came?
The top was quieter than Dragon first expected. I mean... There was meant to be a giant, fire breathing dragon up here, and since there was no sign of it? Yeah... Shadow literally collapsed on the ground in exhaustion. Dragon dismounted immediately. He looked around. He saw a hole in the ground. As he walked towards it, the hole seemed... bigger. Larger and larger the hole 'grew', soon taking up roughly a 9x9 area of ground. Dragon peered down and saw... A dragon egg. He was just about to go and pick up the egg when suddenly, you guessed it. The parent had returned to its unborn hatchling.
The dragon landed, causing the earth to shake. Blocks flew everywhere, and two stones appeared from under it. Dragon drew his sword, only for it to be blown out his hand by the wind of the dragons breath. Running back to pick it up, he noticed it was gone. A figure was standing there. "Not so fast, DragonSlayer." The figure wield the sword, and looked at the blade, along with the engraved symbols that represented enchantments. "Impressive sword. It would be a shame if it was stained." Redkiller looked up at dragon. "with your blood!" red threw himself at dragon, knocking him off his feet, and put the sword to his throat.
Chapter 6: Battle of the Titan Guilds.
redkiller had Dragon pinned down, sword only inches away from his neck. Redkiller prepared to stab when out of no where, a flaming arrow hit him. "Hoi! No one touches a Vortex member without defeating ME first!" A figure arose from the horizon, sun behind him blinding red. The player leapt up out of the sun drawing his sword. "OneMan!" Dragon shouted, happy to see his friend once more after being absent for so long.
redkiller took his foot off of dragon. Weakened after the kick, dragon lay there. "Well, well, well. Look who decided to show their face." red sneered. "Quiet red. It's all in the past. I'm back now. For good."
"I wouldn't be so sure." Red responded, a smile crept up his face. He turned, and whistled. From the bottom of the hill, a couple of Arcanians arose. Fully equipped for a fight. OneMan, knowing he wouldn't make this alone, turned and whistled. A few... Vortex-ians came up from the horizon, also plastered head to toe in diamond plating. "For Minerealm!" OneMan shouted, as the Vortex members ran to battle. "For arcane, and arcarion!" Red shouted,
That was when the war broke out.
Chapter 7: The weakened.
Blood was all over Mount Arcane. Half in bodies, half soaking in the grass. "Such a nice sword." red whispered to himself. "Now it's stained with your fellow guildies blood!" Red turned to where Dragon was. He was gone. "What?!? Where is he!" Red turned frantically, desperate to find his next kill. Then the shadow went over him. He looked up.
"Oh chocolate sprinkled chinchilla's"
The dragons body collapsed on red.
Dragon hopped off the dragons nose when the dragon lay still, and looked at his latest slay. He bent down, and picked up his sword. Then he remembered. He turned, and ran to each Vortex member, helping them with their regeneration potions. Then he saw, what he hoped never to see. He inhaled, hoping this was all a dream. But it wasn't. He slowly walked over to a bleeding body. He took off the helmet.
"Monster!" He gasped, tears gathered in his eyes. "Hey Dragon... Glad your alright..." The weakened x998monsterx coughed, a painful look filled his face. "I just want to say... I tried... You were a great friend..." Then it went silent.
The wind didn't blow.
The clouds didn't move.
The arcane orb stopped flickering.
It was almost as if the world had died right before him. Yet, it was only one minecraftian. One minecraftian, that was Dragon's best friend. Dragon picked up the body, and the rain started to fall.
Chapter 8: The egg
Shadow came over and turned to dragon. He placed the body of his friend on the steed. Attaching a lead to the horse, they walked over to the pit. Dragon stepped in, and picked up the egg. He turned to the rest of Vortex, they lowered their heads. Putting the egg in his inventory, they headed back to Dragon's house.
Each and everyone of the Vortex/Xeros members came to the realm. To say their goodbyes to a faithful player. Allowing himself to have some alone time, and to think through what just happened, Dragon placed the egg on his podium. "If only I didn't go. Then none of this would've happened." Dragon lowered his head, and placed his hand on the egg.
There was a rumble.
Everyone turned to Dragon, "Its hatching!" Someone spoke in the crowd of people. Cracks appeared, along with a short crunching noise. Just then, a crack different from the others opened, allowing Dragon to see a bright light shoot up from the egg. Then, there was an explosion in the roof, the beam of light struck down at Monster's supposedly dead body. The body arose, leaving everyone gasping.
Monster's eyes struck open.
He fell on the floor only to have everyone greet him and help him up. Except dragon. He stood by the egg, arm still stuck to the egg, eyes wide open, not believing what he had just witnessed. Monster walked over, and the two friends did their "handshake". The hatchling soon emerged. Dragon turned, and looked at the newborn Dragon. He lifted it out of the egg and onto the ground. It snuggled up to Dragon's leg. Instead of DragonSlayer155, he, from this day forwards, would be known purely as:
"Dragon."
Chapter 9: What happened next?
Well, FrozenHeart the dragon grew strong, along with the bond of all the Vortexians with Wo1f back. They would meet up regularly, and discuss random things. Dragon became Minerealm's best horse racer with Shadow, who had a foal with a lovely brown horse named "Winter". The foal was a Grey horse with the highest stats on the server. x998monsterx became a wither hunter, giving out lessons to noobs on how to slay one with the greatest of ease. OneMan stayed on Minerealm with no more bans, Cube ended up rich from trading horses and every other player so on.
The Tale of FrozenHeart
BONUS CHAPTER
Spoiler:
"Your predictions are impressive 'Elder One', perhaps you could predict how long it'll take for that giant dragon body to despawn off my map?" Intelli slammed a map infront of Aelcalan, finger on mount arcane's "red lump".
Aelcalan scratched his chin.
"Well?" Intelli questioned the Elder One's power.
"5 years"
Intelli left the game.
Well, thats pretty much it! First story i've finished... Woah...
Approx. 2.5k words used.
Approx. 11.7k characters (as in letters and stuffs, including / etc.
Hope you enjoyed!
Making the Youtube video ASAP!
- - - I hope you guys enjoyed reading this as much as I did writing it!
DragonSlayer155 wrote:Dragon returned to Xeros, and head towards Legit and Monster who were discussing kittens and what would happen if you threw one at a brick wall.
Riiiiiiiiiight..... 'cause Xeros is Amazing!
A wise person should have money in their head, but not in their heart. –Jonathan Swift
Did I die? Or did I run around sucking out people's souls?
I am the whirring thing past the corner. I am the darker patch under the bed. I am the tapping on your window; the extra steps on the sidewalk; the voice whispering your name. I am Stalkerbot, and I am watching you.
