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By DragonSlayer155
#170679
The Story of FrozenHeart: SF (So Far)

A little something Ive been working on. Its at about 40% and bare in mind that Im still pretty young. Its about how the dragon that I will be building in Xeros was created. Anyway, have a read:
The Story of FrozenHeart
Includes the previous tale: The Day The Dragon Came
Featuring: DragonSlayer155, CubeGuy314, Legit_Neymar, RedKiller123, Aelcalan, x998monsterx and Shadow the horse.
Chapter 1: "Shadow"
Taking the nether is usually dangerous. But with most of the major pvper's gone, there was no reason not to. DragonSlayer took a step out the portal, and looked at his co-ordinates. He started heading to the Vortex Grinder, where along the way there would supposedly be a secret passageway to enter to reach his fellow guild member, CubeGuy314. As he approached the grinder portal, he heard a knock at the wall. He turned, to see pistons retracting, sucking in the wall, to reveal a familiar face. "Cube!" Dragon said, happy not to see an ambush. "Hey Dragon. Mind ya step and follow me, I'll take you to my place." They walked for blocks, but finally reached a portal that Cube leapt through. Dragon hastily followed, weary of the pig men behind.

They came out to an area, chock full of passive mobs. The two player's travelled up a flight of stairs, through a pair of double doors and came to a small horse pen. "Here he is!" Cube spoke proudly of the pure black foal that stood beside him, which was gazing at Dragon. Pulling out a saddle, wheat and a lead from his back pocket, Dragon lassoed the foal out of the cage to his feet. He then gave some wheat to the stunning creature, who then grew in front of their blocky eyes. Seating himself on the now grown horse and placing on the saddle, Dragon rode over to Cube. "So what are you going to call him?" Cube asked, looking repeatedly back and fourth from the horses blue eyes, to Dragons purple ones. Dragon looked around, and from under his horse, he stopped, stared, looked up at Cube and said, "Shadow."

Chapter 2: "The Article"
After departing with CubeGuy, setting off on a time-consuming journey and swimming through several oceans, Dragon made it back to his home city, Xeros. He got off the horse, put on the lead, and took his new companion to the freshly crafted stables he and his friend Legit_Neymar had put together the night before. After designing a small track, he and Legit raced around day after day. Night after night. Soon becoming Minerealm's best horse riders.

3 days later, when he had just finished his transferral of items to Xeros, x998monsterx saw a piece of paper fly towards him in the wind. Slapping him in the face, it was an article of a Mountain that supposedly had a dragon on it. Knowing that Dragon would soon be know as HorseRider155, he dashed over to him and stopped the horse, causing it to buck and for him to fly off. "Dragon!" Monster exclaimed, running over to a dazed Slayer. "Look what I found. Its an article about a dragon that lives on... Mout Arnae?" DragonSlayer stood, took the paper, and read it. "Never heard of it. It sounds cool though. And Shadow needs to get used to things like this. Why not?" Dragon studied the paper more, but couldn't decipher the smudged writing. "Hmm. I think we need to see, y'know, 'him'" Dragon told Monster, who now had a shocked expression on his face. "B-b-but Intelli said not to go to him, unless things were desperate!" Monster replied. "Yes, but nothing desperate has happened recently, and he might want company." Dragon quickly responded, making his point valid. "Ok, but you go. I'm not getting banned."
"Suit yourself"

Chapter 3: The Elder One
Dragon spawned at Spawn City, and navigated some risky turns. Eventually, he reached an old shack, with the 3 letter's A-E-L above it. He entered through the steel doors, guarded by a dog. As he stepped inside, it was almost like a tardis. The inside looked like something from a science-fiction novel. The walls had neon lights in them, that glowed back and forth between green and blue. The walls were a sharp silver and they all directed up to a single point in the roof. Below that point, sat a figure. The Elder One.

"DragonSlayer155, I presume?" The Elder One suddenly spoke, causing Dragon to jump. "How did you know it was me?" Dragon replied now conscious of what the Elder One was capable of. "You may ask up to three questions every day, and that was your first." The Elder One arose from his seat. "Staff can see everything. We even know where you live DragonSlayer." By this point, Dragon was a little creeped out. But he still had to ask his question. "Do you know where Mout Arnae is?" Dragon spoke with more confidence this time. "Mout Arnae? There's no such place!" The Elder One started chuckling, thinking that Dragon had been sent here as a joke. "But look here," Dragon responded, showing the article to the Elder One. "Mout Arnae." The Elder One looked at the letters. Rearranged 1 or 2. And chuckled. "This article is quite old. The writing has faded but it all means Mount Arcane." Dragon, now knowing where to head, thanked the Elder One and turned to leave. But just before he left, he turned and said, "For my final question. Who are you?" The Elder One rose, took off his hood and spoke with power: "Aelcalan."

Chapter 4: Mount Arcane

Dragon returned to Xeros, and headed towards Monster and Legit, who were discussing kittens and what would happen if you threw one at a brick wall. "Guys!" Dragon shouted across several realms towards them. The pairs of Xerosians turned and looked at Dragon, now only a couple of blocks away. "Im taking a trip to Mount Arcane with Shadow. Anyone wanna come?" Dragon spoke excitedly, hoping to hear a 'Yes' from someone. "Mount Arcane? Isn't it that one there?" Legit pointed out to a large mountain on the horizon. "Yep!"
"And you want to climb it?"
"Yep!"
"And your taking Shadow the horse?"
"Yep!"
"And you want us to come?"
"Yep!"
"And why are you doing this exactly?"
"Ye- I mean... There's a Dragon there, which supposedly is the biggest on Minerealm which many have repeatedly failed to defeat. "Well I gotta... Finish the HQ! So I cant come Im afraid." Legit muttered, quickly running off after. Dragon turned and looked at Monster. "Sorry Dragon. Its a no from me. I think ill stay here and finish the realm." Monster told Dragon, who by now was already starting to go over to the stable.

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Updating soon!
Thanks for reading. Post idea's and your thoughts in the comments!
Dont be too harsh please.
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By dlgn
#170685
I like it.

(in other words, me pls.)
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By TechnoProdigy
#170686
Yet another story I'll begin reading and then swiftly abandon because I'm far too lazy, despite having nothing else to do.

-exasperated sigh-
By DragonSlayer155
#170702
DragonSlayer155 wrote:Dragon returned to Xeros, and head towards Legit and Monster who were discussing kittens and what would happen if you threw one at a brick wall.
Wondering why no one picked up on this...
Lawl.
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By dlgn
#170707
DragonSlayer155 wrote:
DragonSlayer155 wrote:Dragon returned to Xeros, and head towards Legit and Monster who were discussing kittens and what would happen if you threw one at a brick wall.
Wondering why no one picked up on this...
Lawl.
*Carries Meowrocket home, loads giant slingshot*
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By OneManWo1fPac
#170729
That's alot to read and doesn't even count towards my schools summer reading...
By DragonSlayer155
#170752
OneManWo1fPac wrote:That's alot to read and doesn't even count towards my schools summer reading...
a) Thats only HALF of it.

b) Sneak peak:

Chapter 6: Battle of the Titan Guilds.
redkiller had Dragon pinned down, sword only inches away from his neck. Redkiller prepared to stab when out of no where, a flaming arrow hit him. "Hoi! No one touches a Vortex member without defeating ME first!" A figure arose from the horizon, sun behind him blinding red. The player leapt up out of the sun drawing his sword. "OneMan!" Dragon shouted, happy to see his friend once more...............

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This is the video of the dragon I made:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TZrQke3Mxl8
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